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hello Paki,i really like the story that you and your group did it's really funny or though one thing that's i think need to be worked on is the punctuation in the writing .
Eg suddenly he started levatatting he screamed in shock he had become surper ice , Ice boy.
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ReplyDeletehello Paki,i really like the story that you and your group did it's really funny or though one thing that's i think need to be worked on is the punctuation in the writing .
ReplyDeleteEg suddenly he started levatatting he screamed in shock he had become surper ice , Ice boy.