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Tuesday, 11 August 2020
Bog Comments
Today we have been learning about how to write a good blog comment. We added a greeting, then a positive comment and lastly a question. We are also practicing using full stops and capitals letters.
Kia ora. My name is Zara and I attend Te Hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.I really like how your comment is positive .This reminds me of my anamason.Next time you could add some more words.Good work! Zara.😁
Kia ora. My name is Kyra and I attend Te Hapara School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I really like this because the video and I liked how you tried your best. This reminds me of when we went on camp to miss savages farm. Next time you could make your words a bit funker Awesome work! Kyra
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments: Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let me know that you read, watched or listened to our blog Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question
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Kia ora. My name is Zara and I attend Te Hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.I really like how your comment is positive .This reminds me of my anamason.Next time you could add some more words.Good work! Zara.😁
ReplyDeleteKia ora. My name is Kyra and I attend Te Hapara School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.
ReplyDeleteI really like this because the video and I liked how you tried your best. This reminds me of when we went on camp to miss savages farm. Next time you could make your words a bit funker Awesome work! Kyra
kia ora my name is kade from te hapara i like the animating of the video i would also want to know were you found this video.
ReplyDeletewow your Blog is amazing because you put effort into it
ReplyDeletehi my name is Souta I like how you ask stuff next time you could add longer sentences nice!!Souta
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